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Fading Away
Contributed by
Chanti
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Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
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Im hearing voices,
inside of me,
saying that my soul should be free.
Im seeing things,
I wish not to see,
like heartbreak, sadness,
and loss of dignity.
Im feeling pain,
and depression,
im starting to lose,
my own expression.
And now I find myself,
at loss of any perfection,
I am fading away,
in my own reflection.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2002-12-09 01:30:00]
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Re: Fading Away
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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Very pretty write Chanti....the title of it fits well...i love the ending lines i am fading away, in my own reflection....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
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Re: Fading Away
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 06:51:12 AM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this, you are not alone. |
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Re: Fading Away
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:10:25 PM AEST
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I've felt like this many times Chanti. It something that hurts a lot. i am glad you able to express your feelings so poignantly, I hope it helps to let everything out. This is so deep and well written.
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Fading Away
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by Sonibe on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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| ....this is completely understandable, you are not alone in feeling this way.... |
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Re: Fading Away
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by Icequeen on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 03:27:29 PM AEST
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| Excellent. For real. Good imagery. True feelings. |
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Re: Fading Away
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:18:10 PM AEST
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I love this, because it came from your heart. I love those last lines. They rocked.
YS |
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Re: Fading Away
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by Sarah22 on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:28:00 AM AEST
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| good poems :*) |
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