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the sweetest taste
Contributed by
rxqueen
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:39:28 AM in AEST
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I live to absorb your entirety
breathe in every ounce of you
you are the epitome of sensuality
a being so passionately true
why can't I have just one caress
a longing gaze into these eyes
lay my head upon your chest
as you melt betwean my thighs
I yearn to give the sweetest taste
bring you deep inside
not a moment would be waste
no fantasy be denied
I'd forfiet forever for a single glance
a meeting of our eyes
for life rarely presents a chance
for love to remove its disguise
Copyright ©
rxqueen
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:51:35 AM AEST
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Wow this is the most beautifull passonate write I've ever written.
A masterpeice of heavenly beauty between a man-n-women.
huugs,luv, smile,
emy |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:16:55 AM AEST
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Oh that was so so sweet, i really liked that Jocelyn.
I live to absorb your entirety
breathe in every ounce of you
you are the epitome of sensuality
a being so passionately true
I love those lines the best.
Jane x |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:24:53 AM AEST
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| aww so sweet. |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by poeteeza on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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| imagery was suggestive, yet subtle... very nicely written |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:22:25 AM AEST
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Excellent, soft, sensual and...classy
Very well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:07:42 AM AEST
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Aww Joce it's so sweet and beautiful, I cried. You have an amazing talent, never stop believing in yourself.
~Amy~ |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:07:43 AM AEST
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yearning is a painfully sweet experience. You voiced it well -
Swelling with passion!
Thanks for writing! |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:08:30 PM AEST
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| this was sensual without sounding like porn..really nice.. not like some of the other manure I've been reading lately.. people turn sex into filth..what is it with that ...it can be so beautiful and they make it dark and dirty..this was soft and sensual..really nice. |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:38:03 PM AEST
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this poem gives new meaning 2 the phrase,
the essence of love, such tender words spoken in
humility, u r brilliant . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:39:54 PM AEST
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passionatly romantic, filled with longing...... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:16:23 PM AEST
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damn my windows began to steam up there!
A loving, carefully written poem... rather
sensual but not over the top.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:20:17 PM AEST
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I was very impressed,
and seriously trurned on...
"sweetest taste"...
Inspired by my 'honey'?
This is cool, Jocelyn.
Something I won't be able to stop reading.
Sweets to the sweet!
--Ghosty
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:48:08 PM AEST
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Awww so sweet and sweet. Hehee.
Scott |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by freckle on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:28:47 PM AEST
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| I think everybody else said all there was to say... Great write... It flowed beautifully and made the reader "feel". I think that's what a good write is all about...evoking feelings. |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:47:38 PM AEST
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I'm back for seconds, thirds...
Hot and sweet!
--Ghosty |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by nanonan on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:51:08 AM AEST
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| it feels like a desire that can never be sated. I understand it fully. and I love it |
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Re: the sweetest taste
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by night_goddess666 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:13:42 PM AEST
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It was a little suggestive but I really did like it. It was also somewhat moving. Great Write! Keep up the good work
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