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Sorrow soaked tears
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:33:11 AM in AEST
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i hear about the soft breeze in the cool night
but i don't see the hope everyone proclaims so bright..
i sit alone and wonder, am i as happy as im pretending
but as of now im wishing i was any ware makeing love without ending
this cold wind still blows even though i cannot feel
i seem so numb, my soul taken from me unable to heal
my heart was never broken but is perpetually without a home
it hurts me so much, and in all my love i have loved alone
i fear i will never breath again
and my search for peace has yet to find an end
A desperate wish is quietly made
i set myself bleeding,letting my sorrow soaked tears cascade
there is so much to be happy about, yet i cant fake a smile
i guess there is something wrong, but im stuck in my denial
im never good enough, and im never going to get any better
im ugly, useless, a waste of space drifting on sorrows zephyr
Nothing left for me to see
A failure is what I'll always be
With nothing left for me to live for
I lay dying, hopeless on the floor
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Re: Sorrow soaked tears
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:16:22 AM AEST
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well i can certainly relate to this write. hang in there as your time will come.
I had given up on luv to but a dear friend was patient enuff to lead me in the right direction.
Hang in there and trust god to get u there.
i don't have anyone right now but I have many friends to help me get thru. If u need to pm me any time. I don't really have time for im but sooner or later I will get to u on pm.
Hugs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Sorrow soaked tears
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:26:29 AM AEST
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I can relate to that too.I felt like that a few years ago.And it takes time to heal.take care.
well done on the poem. |
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Re: Sorrow soaked tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:34:12 AM AEST
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Bravo on a creative write, i just loved each stanza.
You have writen this so well im re-reading it again and again.
Jane x |
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Re: Sorrow soaked tears
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:21:29 AM AEST
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heartfelt poem, i noticed you were on a different realm of thought your first two stanzas, then kinda changed mid-stream, almost like two poems... hugs n' love nessa
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