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Weeping whiskey tears
Contributed by
tin
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:58:21 AM in AEST
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He takes the lid off the bottle,
and presses it to his lips.
in the liquor he is searching,
for a point to all of this.
He takes the first shot,
he closes his eyes.
It has tightened its grip,
but does he realize?
He takes a second shot,
he couldn't not do it.
I voice my concern,
He thinks he sees through it.
He takes a third shot,
My best friend is getting lost.
He thinks he's found the answers,
But any fool can see he has not.
He throws his glass to the floor,
still searching for peace within the bottle.
Still can't find a reson,
though his mind is running full throtle.
He's weeping whiskey tears,
He's got a firm grasp on the knife.
Before i comprehend his intentions,
He had taken his own life.
He had his flaws,
But he was still a fine mentor.
He taught me many things,
But there's one thing i'll always remember.
The smallest stain,
can ruin the finest sweater.
And the slightest mistake,
will crash a perfect record.
Copyright ©
tin
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2005-02-03 00:58:21]
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:54:01 AM AEST
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this is touching you did a good write here this is a wondefull tribute to a person you must have felt close to, again this is just so good im speachless this is just wow.
SM
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by Ecly on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:41:37 AM AEST
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| This is amazing, excellent write. |
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:46:27 AM AEST
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wow, this was a wonderful tribute to someone that you must have been very close to. I'm very sorry to learn about your loss....
Curtis |
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:02:21 AM AEST
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Sorry for your loss too.
This is a beutifull write.
i've been touched by this write as i've seen so many times what alcahol can do to a person.
such a friend u was to this person.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:58:21 PM AEST
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| this was so sad..kind of hard to read.. |
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Re: Weeping whiskey tears
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 12:46:26 AM AEST
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truly a beautifully penned tribute to your friend, so
sad, so sorry for your loss...
hugs n' love nessa
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