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knife takes control
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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you sayed you forgave me
then brought it up again
so for all i know your hating me
and leaving to understand
knowing your leaving
kills my heart and soul
this is where the knife
begins to take control
the cold hard steel
against the soft warm flesh
the hard steel blade
against a runny blood mess
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tractorbabe
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2005-02-02 22:25:18]
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Re: knife takes control
(User Rating: 1 )
by Raven on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:44:34 PM AEST
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| i love it! alot of my poems reference cutting and im not so sure if i should like poems that pertain to that but i do. and yes i do cut. anywho its a very good write! best wishes and keep it up! |
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Re: knife takes control
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by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:16:18 PM AEST
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| nice poem...i like the flow...but he aint leaving...promise...aint never gonna happen...he talked bout marryin' ya the the other day..but i didnt say that ... |
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