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RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST!
Contributed by
POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG
on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i slipped a razor across my wrist
didn't figure it would hurt
but now my life was taken
and i am now 6 feet under dirt!
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my mom and dad sit down and cry
they miss me very much now!
they sometimes look at the sky
and say "when and how?"
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they have no idea how i died
all they know is that i am gone
and sometimes they burst with tears
when they hear my favorite song!
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my best friend sometimes says
that it gets rid of her pain
but messing around with razors
ain't no playin' game!
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but that's my story
and i hope you enjoyed
and just remember a razor went across my wrist
just because i got p*****
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POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG
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2002-12-08 23:20:00]
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Re: RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST!
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:24:26 AM AEST
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Hey, lovebug I liked this poem and can relate to it in someway. Although I can tell you dont know what you are writing about (never gone through it yourself). I can tell you did because you care what your friend is going through. Hope yer friend can find his/herway out of his/her mess.
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Re: RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST!
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:54:09 PM AEST
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i found this quite amusing, but i have to say i agree with joel and that you really can't know what you're writing about until you've been through it yourself. However, well done for trying to understand, i'm sure he/her appreciates it (if you showed them this poem). anyways, good write
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