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~*~Lost HOPE~*~
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:20:34 PM in AEST
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You lost your hope, it turned to dust
Now all you have is an empty soul
With the smell of musk
Lack of hope made you lose your dreams
"They were impossible!" You scream
Without your dreams you lost your heart,
As a person you became very dark
Your friends searched for the light
The light was very much locked up tight
So your friends left you as well
What was wrong with you?
You couldn't tell
You made your way day to day
With sorrow filled thoughts
Leaving you in dissarray
You hated yourself and wanted to die
No one would listen to you cry
If someone had, this wouldn't have to happen
Then your life you wouldn't feel trapped in
But no one listened to a word you said
You were going insane, it was all in your head
That night you lost more than ever
You took your life and lost yourself forever
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Re: ~*~Lost HOPE~*~
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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Yes! this is the exact way most suicidle people feel... Just you forgot their "Disire"
Good poem |
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Re: ~*~Lost HOPE~*~
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:40:58 PM AEST
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| thanks, yeah way too many people feel this way, i wrote this poem while thinking of all the people I know who feel this way... its pretty sad... thx 4 the comment tho! |
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Re: ~*~Lost HOPE~*~
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:09:30 AM AEST
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Loneliness, thinking that noone cares can wreck a life.
And you've expressed that pain, quite poignantly here.
Well-written.
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