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Lovers Passion
Contributed by
Gothchyk
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting on blankets we watch the stars as they start to appear
I feel your hands travel from shoulders to waist as you pull me closer
Wraped in your sweet embrace
I turn and look into the face of the one whom I cherish
I close my eyes as your lips near my brow, staying there only a moment
For I slowly tilt my head as our lips meet
Your movements undo the bind of our fingers once intwined
As your hands explore my shape and form
I pull your shirt off as you raise your arms, exposing you chest
And my fingers graze your soft skin while we kiss
Kisses so soft and sweet they leave both of us wanting more
As eager hands search and caress the one next to them
You gently lay me down
And I feel the soft sand catch me
I tremble as your lips move from collar bone to brest to stomach
Sensing my fear yet knowing my want you draw me close
And whisper in my ear
"I will never hurt you, I love you"
I nod my head and look into your bright shining eyes
And lead you with slow movements
Until I'm under you
Then I follow as we begin to fall into the passion that only lovers know
Pulsating to the rythm of waves breaking on the shore
Knowing then that you are who I'm meant for
Copyright ©
Gothchyk
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2005-02-02 20:11:03]
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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| this is one of the best love poems I have ever read, andit fits your style well, loving, yet still with a hint od darkness, very well done. |
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:33:55 PM AEST
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| It occurs to me you do have talent..Know this..Talent is used and can also be abused..I hope you know the path you take.. |
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:29:08 AM AEST
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| i love this poem it spoke of love and passion and alittle darkenss included .well done. |
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by ScreenSaver77 on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:20:28 PM AEST
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Wow, Lovely poem! It's soft, gentle, passionate, i like it, Well done.
Best Wishes
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by skadmatrix on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:07:45 PM AEST
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| vary well made, and really sexxxy |
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by shatteredreflection on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:52:13 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem...great work... hope to read more |
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Re: Lovers Passion
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by mastersr16 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:14:58 PM AEST
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| ive acctually read this one before, i found it in ur folder that one time, but its still great, i love the way you describe whats happening with out using certain words... |
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