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Life's Tribulations~*~
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:09:34 PM in AEST
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Life's tribulations are much too tough
Every road that I turn on is way too rough
I do what I can to catch up with the crowd
Only to become a lost face,
Whose voice will never be loud
At this pace
No one helps me up when my feet give out
They'll just push me down again
Reinstating all doubt
My God, My God, I pray each day
I always have a new mouthful to say
Rude and crude words enter my ears
So I ask the lord to abolish these jeers
I'm still waiting
Patience running low
While others are creating
My doubts, my fears, my woe
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2005-02-02 20:09:34]
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Re: Life's Tribulations~*~
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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| what a life, waiting. what a waste. |
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Re: Life's Tribulations~*~
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by vanilla_flame on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:33:26 PM AEST
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what a life, assuming things that aren't even in the poem
what a life, critizing, but not having support behind your words
to me, i love this poem, original creative, and it doesn't say anything about spending your life juss waiting....
good write |
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