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~*One big LIE, Broken hearted TRIES*~
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:00:59 PM in AEST
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One big lie, broken hearted tries
That's all there is to me
That's all you people see
Hidden sorrows lie deep within
Hidden sorrows, covered by a grin
Blackened eyes, so many people despise
What to do when your hope runs out
When all you have left is a heart full of doubt
You cry in hidden places
And smile to the public faces
Hopes of future, passion and greatness
Have deteriorated and now you're left fateless
One big lie, broken hearted tries
That's all there is to me
That's all I ever see
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Re: ~*One big LIE, Broken hearted TRIES*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:03:04 PM AEST
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| Sad write, however, I liked it. Great work. |
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Re: ~*One big LIE, Broken hearted TRIES*~
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:23:32 PM AEST
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| very wonderfully written. |
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Re: ~*One big LIE, Broken hearted TRIES*~
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by poeteeza on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:38:04 PM AEST
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| creative and moving use of words.... nicely written |
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Re: ~*One big LIE, Broken hearted TRIES*~
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:25:55 AM AEST
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What a sad well writen poem i liked how your pened this. It really is great. Thanks for posting this.
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