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Creatures

Contributed by silverjade on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:56:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hardworking
never looking back
they do what is told
never asking why

I see their smiles
such innocent smiles
how could these creatures be evil?,
capable of murder.
so perfect yet so flawful.
what is their purpose in life?
do they even wonder?
could they ever open their eyes?

speaking endless nonesense
it helps them get through the day
makes them feel better
they've achieved something today.

I look in through a window and ask,
who am I to judge?
then I saw myself
indeed I was in there
mixed within them
part of their world
yet i dont feel it,
I ask myself,
who truly am I.

Iam looking around and wonder
whats going on inside
is it noise
are they alive?
I know Iam not different
our way of feeling must be the same,
thats the only thing I have in common,
when amongst these ingrates.

Copyright © silverjade ... [ 2005-02-02 19:56:51]
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Re: Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by whispered_cries on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:59:22 PM AEST
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that's a good poem i enjoyed readin it.

Re: Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:07:00 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. It kind of struck home. I used to feel like that all the time, but, eh, what can you do. You just have to accept it, and that, in my opinion, will put you above the others. They don't see it, but you do, that makes you different and better than them.

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