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Alone in the Dark

Contributed by whispered_cries on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

hands pulling on my skin
faces forming an evil grin
i look around
try to look for a way out
but i don't see light
not even slight inch
i'm alone in the dark
your evil sorrounding my every move
i try to escape but the cage comes down around me
keeping me trapped in your evil bondless sea
i'm alone in the dark and all i could do is get used to it
unless i can find a way out
which i hope will be soon
i long to see at least the silver moon
to see the light of peaceful hope
and not the dark that will leave me on a steep slope
of mixed up and confused thoughts
of what real love is
of what it can be
because i obviously don't know now
because you've confused me and used me
and made me believe i was your only one but what i was
was just another person, another victim of your abuse and use
i'm alone in the dark
wondering why
i thought you could ever be a great guy
why did i have to choose you?
you seemed warm from far away but when i got closer
it was like the coldest winter day
icy and freezing
i'm alone in the dark
waiting to be free, from the evil standing next to me.

Copyright © whispered_cries ... [ 2005-02-02 19:55:06]
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Re: Alone in the Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by silverjade on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:02:53 PM AEST
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really good poem, i felt it

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