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Solitary Infection
Contributed by
Deleterious_Dislike
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One day
your pose will be corrected
tomorrow
Perfected
to a degree
thats slightly obtuse
They say
my mind has been infected
with sorrow
injected
deep into me
through mental abuse
This time
I'll be happy on my own
and some day
really known
no bloody tears
no more bloody scars
I'm fine
to stay here all alone
I'm okay
I wont moan
about my fears
of whats beyond the stars
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2005-02-02 19:18:07]
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Re: Solitary Infection
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by WhiteDove47 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:28:39 PM AEST
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| Your point comes out loud and clear in this poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Solitary Infection
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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| brilliance and talent versed into one extraordinary poem. |
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Re: Solitary Infection
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:56:30 AM AEST
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| my favorite from you so far deleterious! so much meaning in relatively few words. i love this one, 6 out of 5. simple and effective. |
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Re: Solitary Infection
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:25:54 AM AEST
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| w00t |
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Re: Solitary Infection
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:39:41 PM AEST
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ahh
you are so clever
I like it |
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