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Nothing Left
Contributed by
upomik
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:11:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You've won
Don't you see?
You've taken the one thing I love
Away from me
My music is gone alright?
Now leave me alone
What more is there to take?
You have all that I own
Just let me sit here and cry
Like the nothing that I am
While you walk away and laugh
Not giving one damn
You've taken who I am
Are you happy?
You should be
Now leave me alone
And let me be
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-02-02 19:11:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nothing Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:15:52 PM AEST (User
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Sad write. I can really feel you emotions in this. Great job. |
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Re: Nothing Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:41:47 PM AEST (User
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there is more to life than just one thing. |
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Re: Nothing Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathbringer on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 02:19:56 AM AEST (User
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this is a good poem ... If anybody says otherwise ... kill them :).Keep writing ... it always helps loosen the burden on one's soul ... and it's a good way of expressing yourself.Keep writing |
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