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honey
Contributed by
the_Ghost_Moth
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:47:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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honey
by
Ghost Moth
~~~~~~~~~~~
matchstick arrows
poison the heart
that's sunk too deep
in the honey
you turn to glass
too ugly to treasure anymore,
you're worthless
and have to hide it,
like something living in a jar
that can still taste the sweet marmalade
you like my yellow jacket...
but beware the stinger,
tho I love your touch
I know I'm trouble
smoke me out of some cool hive,
out of the drone-infested amber collection...
i only need food, water
love and care
believe me
i'll give you the sweetest
honey
i'll steal from every flower in the world
just to fill your heart
as long as
you
keep me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
copyright 2005 by the Ghost Moth
this compostion
january 3, 2005
original write: dec28,2004
First appeared on AlexPoetrySite,
this version debuted on Ocean Full of Soul
in early January 2005.
Copyright ©
the_Ghost_Moth
... [
2005-02-02 18:47:07]
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Re: honey
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:49:41 PM AEST
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O_O
Moth, writing love poems. Dear god, the world realy is at it's end. Ah well, at least we'll go out with somthing good! |
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Re: honey
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:04:33 PM AEST
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| Nobody writes love poems like yours Mothy. Good work and nice metaphor. Cheers! |
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Re: honey
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:04:55 PM AEST
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creativly clever view, beautifully sweet, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: honey
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:13:10 PM AEST
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i'll steal from every flower in the world
just to fill your heart
oh if only the world was full of ambition tlike this -
smooth words honey, smooth words. |
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Re: honey
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:08:42 AM AEST
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| My god you make me hot! This was... I don't even know what to say... It was creative and sexy. Nice. I want more. |
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Re: honey
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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this was amazing, great metaphor what can i say....i hope to read more of your work cause this was great.
Curtis |
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Re: honey
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:02:03 AM AEST
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My god, you do have a way with your words.
This was just "honey licking good" it was so sweet and you sure know how to make a girl hot.
Loved this Ghosty keep them comming.
Jane x |
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Re: honey
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:10:27 PM AEST
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I read this poem and the others from your
other site. I think its cute(for lack of a better
word lol) that you're posting them in february,
just in time for valentines day. lol. =)
I liked thse lines the most:
"smoke me out of some cool hive,
out of the drone-infested amber collection..."
and
"i'll steal from every flower in the world
just to fill your heart" |
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Re: honey
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:13:39 PM AEST
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Mothy, you effin rule man...seriously, this was just another masterpiece to add to you collection of many...Great great great job here
Mason |
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Re: honey
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:58:05 PM AEST
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Ghost your poem is sweet as hunny, I Hope the girl you wrote it for appreciates it! She is lucky to have you!!!!
XOXOXJill |
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Re: honey
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:20:55 PM AEST
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| sexy scroll! I thought I'd check out some old works on here... |
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Re: honey
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by Archie on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 02:10:38 PM AEST
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| It is ashame that i don't see much new poetry by you any more. This poem is very good. i know you said a few months back that you did not feel comforable posting poetry any more but i think this site needs your voice. I think we need the voice of your words to aspire to something greater than ourselves. You are one of the reasons i have not quit writing as i had thought to do earlier this year. Thanks for a great poem and for a voice that inspires the best in others. see ya in the forums. |
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