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I Want Out!
Contributed by
freckle
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:33:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I Want Out
I want out of my life
I want to be somebody new
I don't like who I'm living with
How about you?
I am so chaotic
It's a wonder I don't combust
I see people with all their THINGS
And I am filled with lust
Why can't I have this?
Why can't I have that?
I'm sick of the same song
No matter how I try, I always end up wrong
I want out of my life
Now how can this be true?
I am a woman, mother, wife
with way too much to do!
I feel like I am barely gripping
To the thread of sanity
There's this and that and another
And everyone turns to me....
Why can't I take a bubble bath?
Why can't I read a book?
Why am I always the ONE
To clean and then to cook?
I want out of my life
Yes, I know that I repeat
But as long as I keep pressing on
I keep fending off defeat.
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-02-02 18:33:05]
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Re: I Want Out!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:06:30 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem..... I feel the same thing sometimes.... that some feeling & things in my life are to overwelming.... beautiful poem! |
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Re: I Want Out!
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:14:11 PM AEST
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Calgon, take me away !!!! I had to start investigating, I kept seeing freckles sowing up in comments on my writes. I am glad I did.
A good one to start out in too as I can so completely relate. I look forward to reading more.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: I Want Out!
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by FLStatePoetryAmbassador on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 10:10:43 AM AEST
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| Very heartfelt and personal .... nice choice of words and pun too. Great job!!! |
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