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Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Perception held in captive time
From falling clocks and clouds sublime
Where silhouettes entwined in thought
Lie hollow, shamed, alone, distraught
Reflections of ones painful years
Flowing out through mirrored tears
When shattered glass imbues your mind
A prism of the last confined
In visions of a broken truth
Where shadows crawl and cant feel Ruth
As mirrored tears reflect one plight
This paradox of sound and sight
From clouds sublime and falling clocks
Where minds escape the shadowed locks
A hollow shell, emotion dry
To only hope the end is nigh.
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:30:02 PM AEST
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May i be the first to comment.
Very good, very. Nicely done.
Glad I helped with the name =)
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:45:34 PM AEST
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beautiful luke, i have so missed your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:08:44 PM AEST
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| Awesome write! Great flow. |
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:26:04 PM AEST
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amazing write,
Reflections of ones painful years
Flowing out through mirrored tears
When shattered glass imbues your mind
A prism of the last confined
I like this alot, great write |
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:08:43 AM AEST
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| amazing images and your general use of words is mind blowing. the last stanza was my favourite but the whole poem made my arm hairs stand up! |
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Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:34:43 AM AEST
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You can't imagine how good it is to see your poetry on the home page my friend. Precision writing and such strong emotions made you then, and make you now one of the finest writes I have ever read..
It's good to see you Luke
Barkeep!! Larry |
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