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Am I Heartless?

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How could you be such a *****
To someone whos in need
Treating them like they had a contagiouse disease
Not caring they were hurting, pain brought her to her knees
How could you ignore such a cry for help plea?

Now you better hate yourself so much
Look what you did, you heartless freak
Your so meak, just so weak
You couldnt go through with what she tried
your so mean, on purpose you forget all her cries
Just only thinkg about all the past lies

From the hospital she calls for you
You dont want to talk to her too
Still wanting to ignore, not caring
You dont want to care
But she says its to you that her soul she does bare
Crying out for you help

Just because of all the past hate
You let her make her own fate
Taking that blade across her wrist
Balling her hands up in a fist

Talking about how much she hates her life
Always depressed, know the price
Of a life so destroyed

Parents seperated
See the pain created
Lost loved ones, so confused
Soul is removed

No conscience, not caring if she hurts others
She shouldnt be denied help
But you did just that
And didnt care, Do you now?
Sad to say, not really
Im sorry i dont.

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-02-02 15:45:33]
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Re: Am I Heartless? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:30:15 AM AEST
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amazing write!

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