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Broken

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Looking from the outside in,
i cant explain my feelings within
Always hiding, afraid of what they would think
That they'd judge
They think im as peacefull as a dove

Im keeping them decieved
I wont tell them the experiences ive recieved
When everythign hurts so much
i cant explain, i wont feel a single touch
taken over by pain that makes me so numb

So much has happened, i cannot tell
Ive been out under some kind of spell
They dont understand, they cant, i cant
Im consumed by darkness, always alone
No one knows, not even those in my home

How can o trust those i love with how i feel
They all seem to lie, i cant tell whats real
i dont know how to love, i dont know what love is
my heart is shattered and torn
Even from the moment i was first born
Im foreced to be alive and tortured in life

Ill be waiting for the one who sets me free
Free of this darkness that controls me
its seems pointless to wait, everything is so hard
crying inside all day and all night
Only pain is in sight

Whats holding me back is for those i care
To see any of them in pain i cant bare
I have to take on everyone else's pain
Is is a gift or is it a curse

No one can understand and i cant explain
im always consumed by darkness and pain

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-02-02 15:42:04]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:41:09 PM AEST
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Good write..And no as much as ppl try they never can understand other's..

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