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Hidden
Contributed by
bruised_angel
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:39:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Behind the mask's of smiles and laughter,
Hides a face stained by tears.
Hidden by the mask's, she lays broken
Chipped and worn over the years
Transulucent glass and smoking screens,
Props used to mask her means
Hidden in a corner she yeans to be free
But the mask's and pretence keep her trapped, so noone can see
The hidden face stained by her tears, Revealing all her fears
Copyright ©
bruised_angel
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2005-02-02 14:39:05]
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Re: Hidden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:08:19 PM AEST
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| Sometimes we need not say a lot to get our point across, that is the case here. A well done piece!!! |
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Re: Hidden
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by redtempest13 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:35:45 PM AEST
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Great write. Kepp up the good work!
-Gin- |
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Re: Hidden
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:58:02 PM AEST
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Brusied_angel
Nice poem,well said,so much pain
hidden within your words.
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