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Writers Silhouette
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:03:57 PM in AEST
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Whispered depths within sonnets of divine despair
Carressive thoughts consumed in ink, repose of filled affairs
Hourglass sands, lost idle hands composed of paper stares
Mirrored rejection, inky reflection bound by a moonlit glare
Derived from dust creative mistrust, lingered though lament
Progressive death on silence’ mind, a fortitude of torment
Blemished scribes, corrective madness writing ones descent
Silver rings of written gold, stirring past and present
Ravens call once nevermore, In stone this question set
Demise of time a crumbling phase, a stolen thought, regret
Murky depths of ink filled books, dilemmas wont forget
Secluded words, from deep within, the writers silhouette
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:11:10 PM AEST
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| mmm... this was really nice. A wonderful rhyme to drift to sleep upon. Blessings.... *From TB who really really needs to take a nap right now for some reason.* |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:04:36 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous luke, truely a beautiful poem! i love it:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by zaknafein8891 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:25:10 PM AEST
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| Great poem. You definately have a skill with words and symbolism, but to me the lines seemed a little long making it harder to read. in the future I think you should keep it four or five word a line, so that its taller and not so wide. but a great work otherwise. |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by redtempest13 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:39:09 PM AEST
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Great write. Keep up the good work!
-Gin- |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:11:18 PM AEST
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| Very nice x X x |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by freckle on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:40:38 PM AEST
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| After spending time re-reading The Raven just a few hours ago, I love the feel of this poem. The words are wonderful and I'm sure any writer can relate! |
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