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I Suffocate
Contributed by
valek
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:10:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep tender emotional lust, caught within green circles
Twisted between fate and what possibly could be
dark black wings on a pale white canvas
Intertwined within a thought and what you could see
I asphyxiate on syllables of words that never form into sound
Tied up, lifting me to places my feet never touch ground
In your energy I see a vision of my souls eulogy
Being spoken by a man with no face
I blink and I catch your eyes spark like fire
The ability to breath leaves without a trace
Your smile shines like jesus on a steel cross
While my emotion and love have been dulled by pain and loss
I wish I could tell, believe me I've tried
Yet all I feel stays bottled up inside
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valek
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2005-02-02 13:10:20]
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Re: I Suffocate
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:31:02 PM AEST
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| Full of unspoken emotion and cloudy feelings, interrupted by a spark. Condensed, sucinct and well put! Cheers! |
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Re: I Suffocate
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:16:58 PM AEST
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| Very well written concrete images. |
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