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A Beautiful, Broken Angel
Contributed by
valek
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:00:20 PM in AEST
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dreaming to fall into your kiss
soft touch grazing my flesh like rose petals
smelling my tender felt lust in your perfume
not wanting you to be a target that i miss
to lay and sleep with you at night
running my fingers through black and pink strands
thoughts of how all i feel could be right
to take you by your small, cold hands
i feel so calm when i am with you
yet sometimes you feel so far
away, like an angel with a broken halo
still you dont know how beautiful you are
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2005-02-02 13:00:20]
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Re: A Beautiful, Broken Angel
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:01:20 PM AEST
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wow that was heavely loving and touching, great poem Valek
pix xx |
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Re: A Beautiful, Broken Angel
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:42:15 PM AEST
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simply beautiful left me with a calm feeling thanks for sharing this Ill watch for more
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Re: A Beautiful, Broken Angel
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 04:02:56 PM AEST
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| god this is beautiful...i just discovered you and i've just sat here, absorbed in your poetry. your words just flow with such beauty, and a calm to them that i can only watch in awe. truly, you are deeply talented xxx |
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