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Master Please Let Me Love Him
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:52:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Master let me love him please,
I am bringing him down on his knees,
Stop the hurt I am begging you,
I can no longer carry on putting him through.
I have hurt him so much,
With my good heart I have lost touch,
As you stand firmly in my way,
Making it harder day after day.
I want to love him, show him compassion,
To me he is the best thing that has happened,
Now I am going to lose all that I have got,
As my love is a thing that time has forgot.
Show some mercy please dark master,
There are so many cracks now in our plaster,
The strain is killing us both can’t you see?
You’re not just killing him, but also me!
Free me so I can love this man,
Let me give to him all that I can,
He deserves happiness in his heart,
Not to be carried away on the headless horse man’s cart.
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pixie
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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| wow..the headless horsemans' cart..how did you think of that? that's quite unique..pixilator.. kind of cute in a dark way..(scratches head....hmmm) |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:40:27 PM AEST
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you have the power within you to free yourself this is another awesome write Pix Pix
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:42:31 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this so much!! and i second that comment, the headless horman's cart was very creaive. Awesome write i loved it!
~Alucia~
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:53:39 PM AEST
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i don't know who master is but if it's who i think tell
him 2 take a hike, your a woman, and women can
accomplish the impossible when it comes 2 love,
speaking of master, this is a master peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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| Exquistly written |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:36:02 PM AEST
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wow pixie you writes are like just awsome.
I always enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:58:59 PM AEST
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so heartfelt, like a prayer, i hope for you all your dreams and wishes come true for you so deserve them too, hang in there:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by redtempest13 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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I enjoyed it very much. Sad and beautiful at the sane time. keep up the good work.
-Gin- |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by jdog on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:58:38 PM AEST
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Wow 580 something poems...keep em coming! You are an amazing writer and hope to read more of your poems. Sorry i dont get a chance to comment all all of them but i dont have that much time. All the ones i have read have been amazing though. Keep it up.
Jason |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:45:27 PM AEST
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Another fine write Pixie dear. It is within you, the strength to effect change. The desire seems there as well ... simply search out the tools needed to make the changes necessary. You can do this. And you do know that you can too.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Master Please Let Me Love Him
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:21:26 AM AEST
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Wow you put my writing skills to shame Kriss.
This was just a brilliant emotinal write, evety stanza pours so much emotion i can't help but feel sad about it.
Jane x |
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