|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
All We Do Is Fight
Contributed by
pixie
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:50:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
All we seem to do is fight,
Lots of black has replaced the white,
Something is ripping our love to shreds,
Killing it off & putting it on its death bed.
My depression, insecurities & anger,
Have finally gone off in our hearts like a banger,
Destroying all the good things we shared,
Into the eyes of the abyss I too long have stared.
My darkness has finally rubbed onto you,
Now the howling demons are sticking like glue,
They are right by our sides,
Daily returning from where they do hide.
My love we are slipping further & further apart,
It won’t be long now til we’re both in the dark,
Years of struggling with my damaged soul,
Has almost stopped us from ever being whole.
I want to fight but I just don’t have the power,
It lies dwindling hour after hour,
I have lost to my demons they have won,
Inside my heart now lies such a stun.
I am destroying you in the process,
Everything I touch turns into a mess,
I am only here to inflict pain & hurt,
Only will I stop when I’m cold under 6 feet of dirt.
Copyright ©
pixie
... [
2005-02-02 09:50:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:59:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well written and you embodied the struggle and fear of hurting him in the text.
Things will always get better, though. There is always an 'up' further along the track... sometimes it takes a while. |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:04:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awww!! big hugs!! if it makes you feel any better, my daughter and i are fighting and disagreeing and its killing me, we never did b4 but now she a big 18 and knows it all *mutters* hugs n' love nessa x
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:53:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awww Pixie *hugs* I hope things get better. I don't have to really say great write because you already know how much i adore your work. :-)
~Alucia~ |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:33:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| (struggles through tears to find the comment button) my grandaughters use toilet paper for tampons..their mom is a lazy *****..I had to call the school..now they hate me nevryours thinks I'm insane..I hope a truck hits afterdark ..but much love and great write..I'll be bled out by noon at the latest..LOL |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:35:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sad write, but with faith there is always hope. May the Lord wrap you in His arms and give you a great big hug. Remember the courage and determination you have displayed in the past. You still have that strength within you
Keep the faith
Willofree |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:01:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
think u have demons pix? u ought 2 see mine, only
difference is, when they rattle my cage, i rattle the
key in front of them, boy dose that ***** 'em off . . .
nice peice of writting . . . Dorian Chambers : ) |
|
|
Re: All We Do Is Fight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:38:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great write. Right now I seem to be destroying my family and tearing them apart. I love the poem.
-Jen |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
