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I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
Contributed by
gina
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Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I HATE YOU
because of the angel you show from afar
and the liar person you truly are
I HATE YOU
because you used my innocent heart
then disappeared after playing your part
I HATE YOU
because you made me live in a big illusion
and left me alone to discover the conclusion
I HATE YOU
because of the stupid girl you made me feel
and the endless harm that time can't heal
I HATE YOU
because,of me , you stealed the best
this sweet thing under my chest
I HATE YOU
because you're heartless,made of stone
no feelings,a statue of flesh and bone
I HATE YOU
because of you my eyes are wet
i hate you and wish we never met
I HATE YOU
detest you,loathe you,can't you see
that you don't deserve to be loved by me
I HATE YOU BECAUSE...
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gina
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2002-12-08 21:00:00]
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 09:06:50 PM AEST
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Hey, Gina I hope this isn't true something that just came to your head. I've been there and it hurts unimaginbly so. Thanx for posting this poem. Just to let you know that girls dont only get hurt... it happens the other way around as well. Once again, great poem!
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by darkkai on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 09:13:03 PM AEST
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| ooh girl! i'm terrified women now. ya know men can hurt equally too. the poem is poweful in ways that make men like me run away from commitments. keep it up gina |
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:59:30 AM AEST
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I have been there and felt the same way Gina. A very angry poem but well expressed. I enjoyed reading it.
Yvonne |
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:40:16 PM AEST
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Hate is a strong word....one which i don't use ...it's sad tho because people take advantage of love we give to them and they take advantage of our weaknesses....i think that's sad....this poem truly touched me deeply....my heart is there trust me....thanks for sharing this one it gives one alot to think about...
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by Opium on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:55:49 PM AEST
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| I wish you hate me instead, so you can still have the one you love in your sweet innocent heart. Someday Gina you will cross path with the one you truely deserve, so don't worry if you waist all your hate, because you won't be needing it then ;) I wish you all the best in life. |
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by azzouz on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 10:04:09 AM AEST
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strong words u got there dear gina....
hope u're getting over him now....if it makes u feel better....
keep up the good work gurl...
i luv your poetry.....
your friend...azzouz |
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Re: I H.A.T.E YOU BECAUSE...
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:58:24 PM AEST
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You know, that must be reaction alot of us go through. Because I know that I have, again, and again, and again.
I ca'nt tell you it will all get better soon, because that's like me saying that the sun will turn into a black hole. Sure it will eventually happen, but I can't predict when. All I can say is that I've been there, and that I understand. If you ever need someone to talk to....
It's a beautiful write, and I love it just the way it is. Hate might be a strong word, but sometimes it's the only word that shows our emotions strongly enough.
YS |
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