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Best Friend, Unaware
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:15:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Many well wishes there've been
And hopes, dreams and prayers
The hard work we've put in
Has been ended in tears
My heart continually breaks
As I imagine you with others
For me, sleep does forsake
Your time spent with another
No longer seeing clearly
The fog of pain prohibits
I love you too dearly
To express but with sonnets
You keep us apart
My dreams I'll not share
Too close to my heart
My best friend, unaware
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-02-02 06:15:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Best Friend, Unaware
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:03:27 AM AEST (User
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Emotional and sad...well-expressed.
I especially liked the line-
'I love you too dearly
To express but with sonnets.'
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