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the butterfly
Contributed by
soccerbaby
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Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
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A free spirit is the butterfly,
a beutiful creation of God is the butterfly,
A soft and beautiful heart is the butterfly.
I want to be the butterfly.
If I were the butterfly
I could go where i wanted.
I could be free,
I could be beautiful and unique,
if I were the butterfly.
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2002-12-08 20:20:00]
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Re: the butterfly
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by Emmie74 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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I like it.
It's got a different, unique style.
Something new.
Good job. |
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Re: the butterfly
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:31:08 PM AEST
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| I think it was very good and you should be more confident in yourself. |
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