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I hope You Understand
Contributed by
shamateur
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:45:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I killed myself today
As I always would say
Just wanted you to know
So that it would show
How much I meant those things I said
I'd never tell a lie even when I'm dead
I hoped you'd understand
But you never listened beforehand
Now I hope you will care
If you get this letter in your stare
Now you know just how I felt
Full of hate when my final card was dealt
I just thought I'd write this last letter
So everyone will know that I never got any better
And that I never had any fear
Of dying with a reason so unclear
I hated them all as much as you
But I should have said how much I loved you
Or how much I cared too
Now I leave you with this at hand
I hope that that you can understand
Copyright ©
shamateur
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2005-02-01 23:45:48]
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:29:42 AM AEST
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| There's a lot of emotion in this. Great write. |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:00:44 AM AEST
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I normlly wont read anything to do with suicide Im glad though that you wouldnt consider doing it. You captured a deep spot in some ppls thoughts in this write well done
Michelle |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:55:18 AM AEST
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wow, i too am glad u would never do it either but I can certainly relate to the thoughts in ones mind running a muck.
it's really hard to fight our own demons at times. it's really good to have friends to understand how we all struggle.
awesome, mucho wisdom.
huggs, undertanding,
emy |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:32:06 AM AEST
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I've been down this road many times. I'm evry impressed that you have the will power to fight off these thoughts. I seriously wish i could. Exllent write btw.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:07:03 AM AEST
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full of true emotions and
a great write |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by ArseCrust on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:47:53 PM AEST
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| i think this is a very deep poem and it is really good |
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Re: I hope You Understand
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by allforyou on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:16:10 PM AEST
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You described exactly how I feel everyday. Amazing poem.
Keep your head up,
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