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Three Haikus of Death
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:25:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Cemeterys' cold
My beautiful Mother sleeps
I wish to wake her
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Forever slumber
Never to be awakened
Buried in the ground
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Father dies, child nine
Eighteen child looses Mother
Cancer took them both
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:28:44 PM AEST
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| Oh man, these just all out rock! Nicly done! |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:27:47 AM AEST
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such beauty in so little said, such substance in a phrase, splendid peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:35:52 AM AEST
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| So sad, but that is life (or death). Short and sweet (bittersweet). Good writes. |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:15:05 AM AEST
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Hi my friend, I would like to comment on these poems, but to be honest, I don't have the slightest idea as to what Haiku Poetry is.
Maybe you could educate me?
Willofree, Terry |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:43:32 PM AEST
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| well..I don't want to start anything..I was going to start my rant about haiku and nature again..but death is a part of nature..so.. you're ok kid LOL.. everyone gets ***** when I do that..but when I went to the haiku seminar they said haiku was supposed to deal with nature ...the first line should set out the season.. so I just say what I learned and try to be helpful.. I'm willing to learn toooooooooooooo..God.. Ever since the war..and the bomb though..geez...rotflmao..HiiiiiiiiiYaaaaaaa!!!! |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:38:27 AM AEST
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| wow those are great haikus. |
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Re: Three Haikus of Death
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:32:06 PM AEST
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Really sad, I am sorry that happened to you. These sound really great though. But I don't know much about haikus but they look nice.
Scott |
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