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Bloody Smiley Face
Contributed by
gimpie
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The needle shines so nicely
The skin is beautifully bare
The blood is flowing red
And the smiley face is there
To lose the man I love
Because he's ready for much more
Comittment I can't fathum
And that shakes me to the core
Now my face has no smile
And my heart is broke in two
But thanks to wrist and needle
My bloody smile......smiles through.
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2005-02-01 22:47:11]
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Re: Bloody Smiley Face
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:49:58 PM AEST
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| Nice write & flow! TD |
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Re: Bloody Smiley Face
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:54:38 PM AEST
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| Sad write. But it has an awesome flow. |
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