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fade to black
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:47:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Your name I have whispered
in the dark of the night
Yet! your spirit comes not
my soul to delight
The darkness and I
have become as one
As we melt into a nothingness
that can not, be undone
For loves flame
has flickered and died
In the darkness-
now and forever
my soul shall abide
Copyright ©
sojourner
... [
2005-02-01 22:47:05]
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Re: fade to black
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:16:08 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautifully sad... an excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: fade to black
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:16:47 PM AEST
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| Interesting..kind of sad |
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Re: fade to black
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:28:57 AM AEST
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| Short, but you achieved what you set out to do so perfectly in this write. Great work. |
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