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Remind Me to Fly
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:08:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Remind Me to Fly
You tell me
To dry my eyes
And say goodnight
Like everything is fine
But I can't believe you're right
This time
But you still try
To free the demons inside
You remind me
That the past is behind
Me and the future is mine
To see things in a better light
And that this is my life
To shine
And I have all the time
To fly
Remind me to fly
And to never die
Remind me to fly
With you in the sky
Remind me
It'll all be alright
Remind me
That I can't rewind
You show me
There were never lies
Before you left me behind
The first time
When you died
But I can't believe you're right
I can't believe it'll all be fine
Without you by my side
With you constantly on my mind
Through day and night
Reminding me I never said good-bye
To the love of my life
When there were so many times
But you say it's alright
As you dry my eyes
And say goodnight
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:12:22 PM AEST
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| Jesus after that write I would remind you to get in bed........Anyhow a very good write once more..You are in your prime now with writing..Damnitt I feel great competition alwasy with you. |
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:33:35 PM AEST
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| I thought this was awesome! TD |
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:15:59 AM AEST
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| I love it.....Awesome write..Again :) |
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:52:25 AM AEST
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Omg remind me to write like you LOL that was really something. I liked it from start to finish. such an incredible write.
Jane x |
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:19:12 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed.
There is sadness, and yet hope in these words.
Keep writing... |
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Re: Remind Me to Fly
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:44:36 AM AEST
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This was okay, i couldnt get into it.. Im not sure why.
May of been the structure and they amount of syllables of each line.
The content was sad, but somethings missing.
3 out of 5 * |
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