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*.The.Effects.Of.Heaven.*
Contributed by
Candy_Dirtbag
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:05:51 PM in AEST
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Flowers growing wild in the fields.
Nothing shall ever come to a yeild.
The beauty of the ivy vines;
over-taking the taste of passionate wines.
Eternally having happiness and love.
Never having another harsh, reality shove.
Time after time, you feel the effects.
All the pain is just another reject.
A suitcase of memories hidden under the bed.
The emotions twisting inside your head.
Caught up in cirlces of being un-dead;
being the new light was shed.
Hear the clock ticking, as I think of you.
Once stuck together, like glue.
At a time when I was seven.
Welcome to the Effects Of Heaven.
7-15-04
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Candy_Dirtbag
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Re: *.The.Effects.Of.Heaven.*
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:09:37 PM AEST
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| great poem, great great great!! I love it, i wish i could comment on it more, but i really don't know what to say but i was surprised it was about heaven at the end, it was great from beginning to end, dont change even one word |
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Re: *.The.Effects.Of.Heaven.*
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by vanilla_flame on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:23:51 PM AEST
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| wow, awesome write! |
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Re: *.The.Effects.Of.Heaven.*
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:28:10 PM AEST
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Need i say anything? =P I absolutely loved it! Very beautiful i lost myself in it for a while. Keep it up
~Alucia~ |
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