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(-=-|.Final.Good-Bye.|-=-)
Contributed by
Candy_Dirtbag
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:02:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The morbid song of dove's lie;
watching as the angels begin to die.
I heard the demon's angered cry;
as I let out a depressed sigh.
Forever trusting who I am;
as I felt life's harsh slam.
It was something like a bloody clam;
coming from my blackened damned.
And nothing else mattered;
when my life became tattered.
From my wrist, the blood splattered;
as the glass in my hand shattered.
The light falling low in the sky;
as I watched the black butterfly.
I'm done giving this life another try;
so this is my final good-bye.
8-2-04
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Re: (-=-|.Final.Good-Bye.|-=-)
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:05:04 PM AEST
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| .... what can i say.... absolutely beautiful write! You have talent, don't ever give it up! Hey you wrote ur poem on my bday 2=) lol, anyway keep on writing and you'll only get even better than you already are... great poem |
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Re: (-=-|.Final.Good-Bye.|-=-)
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:35:09 PM AEST
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| Great write!! Really enjoyed it! TD |
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Re: (-=-|.Final.Good-Bye.|-=-)
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:34:02 PM AEST
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Awwwz *Wipes my eyes and hugs you tightly*
This put tears in my eyes. Great write but you know where i'm at if you need to talk.
~Alucia~ |
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