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Black Melody
Contributed by
biggredd
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You've stripped me of all feelings,
that I once held dear.
There's nothing left to say,
nothing I will hear.
As my blood runs cold-
with betrayel and shame.
But I'll never suffer as you will,
with all your guilt and blame.
Everything but my tears have left,
and all my love has gone.
My eyes are blank,
why did it take so long?
That's all it took-
this one final blow.
I lie watching them shatter,
my heart and soul.
I lie haunted...
lost and forgotten for so long.
Haunted by this mournful melody-
my song.
Everything but my tears have left,
all my love is gone.
My eyes are blank...
Why did I take so long?
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2005-02-01 20:16:12]
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Re: Black Melody
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by Phantomdream on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:21:54 PM AEST
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| This is so true...i've had experiences like this before. |
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Re: Black Melody
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:26:30 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel.Man, was I glad when it was over and I was single again! |
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Re: Black Melody
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:01:01 PM AEST
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I loved the rhyme..it was soo natural and lead up to the question..why did it take so long? I'm still asking that??
great, great write.. |
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Re: Black Melody
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:31:51 PM AEST
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| this is an amazingly talented poem, i love it and im sure people can relate, and although its about a common topic, it is very original, great job |
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Re: Black Melody
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:56:08 AM AEST
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Ohh i so know what you mean, i've been there a lot and it hurts like hell. Anyways before i make a total arse of myself id like to tell you that this was such an amazing poem it really made me remember all those relationships that i had.
Jane x |
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