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Wut u call it
Contributed by
skeezy1
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:35:07 PM in AEST
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Wuddup "superwoman",it's nice 2 finally c u again."hush",dont say anything yet.I hold so so tight,I feel I "cant let you go".Your arms wraps around my neck while i'n "feelin on your booty".U don't trip cuz u let me have yo "goodies"and i get wut i want.Start 2 kiss "my boo",jus "let me love u" my own way "and i"will let u 2."U make me wanna" say "ooh baby" cuz im wonderin if theres Ne room 4 me "in those jeans".Yes i am "stingy",i want tha "title"."B.A.B.Y" tell me sumthin i wanna hear,dont worry bout dem "gossip folks".Lay me down sumwhurr and "put it on me".Show me "how deep is your love" and dont stop til u "say my name".Afta the "satisfaction" we can ask each otha "21 questions",thinkin on how "incomplete" we would have ben if we left each otha.I mean even if we did, i'll still b "down 4 u" cuz your my "sweet lady" that remind me of a pair if "nikes fresh out the box".Ne wayz win 1 ov us has 2 "leave", we do wut we do and meet at "my place" the next time.
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Re: Wut u call it
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:36:34 PM AEST
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| Perhaps your first time should be your finale as well. |
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Re: Wut u call it
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:45:36 PM AEST
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lol. pay no mind to afterdark - he's the prime example of YPDC's embodiment of free spech. heh. I think this shows creativity, and its commendable that you even logged in here, and expressed yourself - as I remember how I was before I came here, almost a year . . . a year ago.
Keep writing.
P.S. Next time, try to insert some line breaks after each full stop to make it easier to read for us.
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Re: Wut u call it
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by ROUGE on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:56:19 PM AEST
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CREATIVE APPROACH. KEEP IT UP.
HOWEVER KINDA HARD TO READ. |
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