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If I Could Be With You
Contributed by
Broady
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I could be with you
I would dedicate my time
To keeping you happy and loved
So that your heart would beat with mine
I feel alone without your touch
My heart can beat no more
My touch is cold, my knees are weak
I fear what life has in store
Alone I feel in this world so cold
But the feelings I express are true
So I ask you again, for the hundreth time
If I could be with you.
Copyright ©
Broady
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2005-02-01 19:00:57]
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Re: If I Could Be With You
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:24:02 PM AEST
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| Very much small time here.There is no real feeling at all..No real love feel involved here.A crush perhaps.But other then that this leaves me cold. |
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Re: If I Could Be With You
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:58:55 AM AEST
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I loved your poem.
Oh I have certainly felt that deep longing.
I hope it all works out for you, if this applies.
Kie |
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Re: If I Could Be With You
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by ilovecasey on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:31:19 PM AEST
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i really didnt like this one that much it left me confused on what you were trying to say. better luck next time!
skyla |
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