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-unknown-
Contributed by
jthzero
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:51:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Tired am I on this road
The travel I must go
Before I can immerse myself in power
Can I not do the impossible and do what is not to be
To be me
And reveal the power
Which hides like a unbloomed flower
Waiting to become awake
And make the earth shake
And in the end decide the fate
Of all those who are fooled in there ideas of being awake
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jthzero
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2005-02-01 17:51:36]
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Re: -unknown-
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:59:34 PM AEST
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nice write..
'...who are fooled in there ideas of being awake'
i like that part...overall very nice! keep it up!
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Re: -unknown-
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:15:57 PM AEST
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| This is as far from Psychotic as Christ.. |
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Re: -unknown-
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:45:12 PM AEST
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this is a good poem keep it up bye
DEMON |
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Re: -unknown-
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:46:37 PM AEST
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| Good write. I liked the last line. |
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