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Whisper
Contributed by
whispered_cries
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:31:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i here the whisper of the wind
going past my ear
oh this isn't fear, i'd usually here the whisper of your voice
but now i have no choice
i need to move on and get on with my life
before my sadness turns into strife
i won't let this sadness bound me and let more sadness into my soroundings
i'll forget about you,
make believe you weren't real
then all the feelings that i had for you would go away
because i can't love something fake
i here the whisper of the wind, i feel it brush my face
and it takes the memeories of you with it
and drops it in the lake
the memories sink to the bottom
and get washed away
and they will never come back, not today and no other day.
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2005-02-01 16:31:31]
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Re: Whisper
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:38:29 PM AEST
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| Good write. I enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: Whisper
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by silverjade on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:04:48 PM AEST
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| thats sad i like it a lot , you put lots of strong emotions in your poems I like your writting. keep up the good writes |
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