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Unfaithful

Contributed by Kay-Kay on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I just walked right out, you didn't care.
It led me to doubt, that's so unfair.

Kicking me to the curb, without a goodbye.
You know that really hurt, I feel I could cry.

What did I do to deserve this, please tell me.
Is there a sign that i missed, please help me.

I got this lost feeling, deep down inside.
I think my heart is bleeding, and on you I relied.

When I heard those words,I started to backlslide.
I went from what i heard, and you thought I lied.

You say that i lied, but you made up all that.
You wish i would die, there will be pay back.

So unfaithful to me, why did you have to change.
I wish you could see, our lives in exchange.

Would it be any different, well in your eyes.
That's not how I'd see it, well well surprise.

~Kay-Kay






Copyright © Kay-Kay ... [ 2005-02-01 15:30:28]
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Re: Unfaithful (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:37:55 PM AEST
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good write. i enjoyed reading it


Re: Unfaithful (User Rating: 1 )
by StarViolet on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:03:05 PM AEST
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Your poem is so full of truth it makes it easier to understand. I really liked it


Re: Unfaithful (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:08:50 PM AEST
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very well done,,,, u need closure.... i do too


Re: Unfaithful (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:15:11 PM AEST
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nicely done I liked to read it
Michelle


Re: Unfaithful (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:57:17 PM AEST
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nice job - you kept a solid forma nd structure throughout and managed to keep the story fluid and interesting.

Smart ending.




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