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hazy
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:59:28 PM in AEST
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from a writers heart
what you see is what you get
whether they are happy
or way too far upset,
what you read is from the soul
with little or no control
written from the heart
all it is apart from,
movement of a mind
what it has seen of kindnessess
what does one's mind possess?
pain and sorrow,
too many tomorrows
a single breath of happiness it breathes
love, that can bring it to its knees
mayhap; this soul is only breathing
on what it is believing,
holding onto threads
until it is dead.
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Re: hazy
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:04:49 PM AEST
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aww *hugs* I hate it when you are sad, you write so well and I hope to read a happy one soon *hugs again*
takecare
pix xx |
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Re: hazy
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:10:32 PM AEST
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I love the bird (you aren't giving us the bird are you? LOL)
you are sooo right..we can only give what is in our soul and heart of hearts.. I too am very down today..and so I don't like to see you feeling this way.. it hurts very much doesn't it? Yes..soul to soul I feel the pain..
beautiful write..I wish I could heal your heart..it's beautiful you know..as is the soul attached to it.. |
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Re: hazy
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:15:18 PM AEST
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all we can do is hold on by a breath
and grab for the things that take our breathes away with both hands
hang in there for you can see beauty in the simplest things and that is a rare gift
Shari |
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Re: hazy
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:48:20 PM AEST
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hugs Nessa I hate to see my bud sad:( Shari is right you see all around you and find beauty in each little thing hold onto your furkids nothing better than slobber kisses lol
this is beautiful Nessa
Michelle |
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Re: hazy
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:08:59 PM AEST
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Just seeing your name on the home page made me smile....
This is beautiful in its sadness Nessa, I have missed your poetry.
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: hazy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:01:46 PM AEST
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mayhap; this soul is only breathing
on what it is believing,
Glorious words -
Thanks for writing this |
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Re: hazy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:49:47 PM AEST
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| Excellent write! I liked the last section. :-) |
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Re: hazy
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:51:55 PM AEST
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this poem is beautiful, it says so much in a quiet way, touches the heart of all who can relate with the sentiment it coveys, and though it's sad in it nature, it is an essensial peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: hazy
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by sojourner on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:15:11 PM AEST
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Very nice,
the poets lament, of what was and can never be again
sojourner, |
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by greeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:43:34 PM AEST
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There is nothing more to the truth than what comes from the heart, excellent. Hope all is well with you and your family.
Nancy |
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Re: hazy
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:22:51 PM AEST
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Awww Ness..I too have missed you so much.. I hope to catch you soon and chat a bit.... Hope all is well with you....and the kids..
Love and hugs
Jenni |
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:25:20 AM AEST
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Wistful and yet, hopeful...
lovely write. |
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Re: hazy
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:02:30 AM AEST
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i have no words to give that describe your poetry other than BEAUTIFUL
michelle |
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Re: hazy
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:33:08 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. I hope you feel better.
Scott |
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:55:41 AM AEST
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Gorgeous poem. Touched with sadness.
Thank you so much for the kind beautiful comments on my poems.
(I loved the bird to) as much as the poem
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:26:55 AM AEST
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good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:28:42 AM AEST
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awwwww *hugs* This is beautiful and sad at the same time, but a wonderful write. Love you always yanky mutter :o).
Hugs 'n Love
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by b_rand on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:36:12 PM AEST
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| I love poems like this! I can't tell you how often I get such a feeling. Great job. |
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Re: hazy
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by colinb on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 04:57:48 PM AEST
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| very sad |
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