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The Brutal Truth
Contributed by
spazie
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:50:29 PM in AEST
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THE BRUTAL TRUTH
I always feel useless
When every one is ruthless
But no one knows the brutal truth
That lies before my very feet
My dad thinks I’m always mad
When in fact im always sad...
Could I really be that bad
Afraid to show my feelings
When no one sees me bleeding
My life has been a lie
And now I want to die
So now I say goodbye
Before I hit the sky
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spazie
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2005-02-01 14:50:29]
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Re: The Brutal Truth
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:15:54 PM AEST
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hey this is a pretty good poem it like how u use rhymes keep it up!
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Re: The Brutal Truth
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:29:22 PM AEST
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| Well, anger is the emotion that is easiest to express, maybe if your suppressing what your feeling that is the reason for your anger, because you should not have to repress it... think about it i did, find out what is wrong, and make a move to change it, is someone hurts u let them know... even if they refuse to hear.....hurting yourself won't do u no good.... trust me.... |
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