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A Man....
Contributed by
strawberrygirl
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A man acts tough around his friend
To him boys come first before his girlfriend
A man can say "Yeah that's my boy"
But to his girl is like "Yeah that's my toy"
A man expresses his feelings never
Until he can say "I LOVE YOU FOREVER"
A man can't be understood
Bet you anything his girl could
A man can hurt his girl by what he might say
To him he'll never change his way
A man gets mad at every little thing
Knowing to his girl sadness will bring
A man don't care if he's mean to his girl everyday
Knowing how much his girl loves him she'll put up with it and stay
But most of all a man won't realize something when it's gone
Because he'll be like "WHATEVER" and move on
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strawberrygirl
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2005-02-01 14:24:29]
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Re: A Man....
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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| A.ww... .amen. Exactly. |
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Re: A Man....
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:23:28 PM AEST
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| good write but thats not a man thats just a poor example!!if that so called man is that way its ur fault u even call him ur man all men are not like that |
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Re: A Man....
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:42:07 PM AEST
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| I think you are writing from the view of a child..You are finding guys is what the problem is..You describe a Man..This and all of what you wrote is not the true action of a Man.. |
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Re: A Man....
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:40:12 PM AEST
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| a boy acts like that... a MAN faces his responsibilities and treats who he loves with the utmost respect. You have not found a man if you have such petty problems. |
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Re: A Man....
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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it took courage 2 write that, and right or wrong you
are entitle 2 your opinon, some provacative words
on your part, i admire your bravato, a characteristic
thought 2 be indginieous only 2 men, my mistake . .
Dorian Chambers |
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