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My cure
Contributed by
jace
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:22:57 PM in AEST
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Sometimes
I feel cold
Some times I
feel intestinally abused
Some times I
Feel I am way too bold
Some times I
Am easily amused
Some times I
Scrawl my pain just to breathe
Some times I
Hit the ground running hard
You call me a joker but you hold the card
I feel the anger rise to the top
I clutch my chest as I feel it rise
It's too late; there is no way to stop
You plainly can see the fire in my eyes
Then you touched me
Uncontrollably I loose the anger that I held so tight
The fire clears and I can see
When I look in your eyes lose all control to fight
Paralyzed I stand in front of you
Drowning in those deep colored eyes
Totally calm there is nothing left for me to do
Every time you touch me a bad memory dies
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2005-02-01 13:22:57]
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Re: My cure
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:03:06 PM AEST
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I was confused at the end..but that's not hard to do to me..but you said "Every time you touch me a bad memory "
so..is this a good thing or a bad thing..I'm not clear..
at first you're losing your anger..but.. |
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Re: My cure
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by jace on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:51:40 PM AEST
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| intentially not intenstinally |
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