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MY BEST FRIEND DID DRUGS
Contributed by
POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG
on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
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sometimes i look at the sky
and i sing my little song
and i hope that the next day will come
and nothing will go wrong!
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this is how it goes
so short yet so pretty
hold on just a second
and let me get it ready!
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twinkle twinkle little star
here you are to help me
guide me through tomorrow
and in my bed i''ll be!
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waiting so quite and peaceful
waiting for my mom to come
that''s when i get this feeling
that i am going numb!
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my knees i can''t feel now
now i am losing my touch
i wondered what has happened
to make me tingle so much!
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i noticed i had something
at the bend of my arm
i looked down to find a needle
and i thought that it wouldn''t harm!
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i thought i would try it
only one time
but the life i got now
was just about not mine!
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it was only a dose of drugs
and i felt better afterwards
but now i feel sick
and now i hope to be heard!
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this message goes to all
everyone that has not tried it
just be sure to stay away
but if you do it,don''t hide it!
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i recommend that you not try it
but if you should,don''t hide it
cause someone will be sure to find out
and that''s how this story came about!
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i tried to hide it and it made me hurt
so i had to tell my dad
that''s when i figured it out
the better life was the one i HAD!
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my mom and dad
won''t let me out of the house now
cause they are scared i will do it again
and that''s when i knew i shouldn''t have tried it!
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but basicly i am saying
don''t do it
because when you do,
you can''t do nothing else!
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POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND DID DRUGS
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 03:36:00 PM AEST
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| You lost the poem's rhythm after stanza 7 but other than that this is good... a message that everyone should see... |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND DID DRUGS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 03:55:54 PM AEST
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| i like it- it has a good message behind it |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND DID DRUGS
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by FaithHope on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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I agree about losing the rhyme on stanza 7, but I also think that stanza 3 didn't "click." But this was a great poem with a wonderful message...
Faith*Hope |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND DID DRUGS
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:09:05 PM AEST
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| we all lose our rhymes along the way..lol..thats easy to fix. Great idea and poem though. |
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