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there she is...
Contributed by
karmen
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:07:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There she lays,
alone in the world,
alone in life,
alone, is all shes ever known.
There she sleeps,
falling from life,
falling from broken dreams,
falling from lost hopes.
There she is,
wishing upon a shooting star,
wishing for a better life,
wishing for something, that feels unreal.
There she waits,
praying someone will come,
praying her life won't end like this,
praying her cuts will heal in time.
There she crys,
neverending, is her story,
neverending are her cuts,
neverending are her regrets.
There she sits,
knowing of the things she could of had,
knowing of the love her heart felt,
knowing her death was coming soon.
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karmen
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2005-02-01 13:07:25]
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Re: there she is...
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:07:45 PM AEST
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it's really good, just one thing, space out the phrases next time, i got a little side tracked...
There she crys,
neverending, is her story,
neverending are her cuts,
neverending are her regrets.
There she sits,
knowing of the things she could of had,
knowing of the love her heart felt,
knowing her death was coming soon. |
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Re: there she is...
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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i like it its very good i wrote some new one ok bye
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