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Mourning the Dream
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Oh my love where have you gone
One day you are here and the next gone by dawn
My heart aches and longs for your return
Please tell me what I did wrong so I can learn
I am tortured with pain, agony and loss
You were everything I wanted, I swear on the cross
Visions of my dream dance in my head
My heart leaping like a ballerina dancing around overhead
My dream had finally come true
I would give anything to still be with you
But so fickle and elusive this entity of love
Isn't it ordained by the One above
How can I accept this paiin to bear
The loss of the keeper of my love so rare
I hurt so badly; I don't know where to start
This person has truly broken my heart
Perhaps you need to survey, if you would
The type of relationship you have withstood
Maybe it is the broken dream that you mourn as such
As the relationship itself may not have amounted to much
Now you are being put to the test
But in reality the dream weighs heavy on your chest
The fact remains the lost dream was never there
So mourn for being treated badly, of which you are aware
Copyright ©
Willofree
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:05:05 PM AEST
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awww so sad *hugs* expressed expertly as only you could
pix xx |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:19:12 PM AEST
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Dreams, some say, are sleeping lies
brought about by lonely sighs.....
This one hit home with me.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by lovingkk05 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:40:53 PM AEST
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| Words cannot say how good this poem is. |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:25:55 PM AEST
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| well, expressed, that ws good.... ... . |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:03:25 PM AEST
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What a sad sad write, i can feel the emtions as i read this. I love the way you write it's so different from the others i read. A wonderfull write and im glad i had the chance to see it.
Jane x |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:25:28 PM AEST
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| Great write my friend, much peace Laura |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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Wow...can I relate to this!! Extremely well written... Raw emotions revealed...
Jenni |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:50:50 AM AEST
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Oh, this is so sad...
I can relate alot to this in places.
Beautiful words.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:32:43 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:32:03 PM AEST
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| that is a sad write, i could feel your pain when i was reading it. You really are a talented writer. |
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Re: Mourning the Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:37:02 PM AEST
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| im still looking for a poem that you have not written to perfection....im still looking, lol. very impressive poem. this reminded me a lot of myself. |
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