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Sometimes...
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:42:17 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I wish that I was dead,
That you found me cold in our bed,
Never again to let out a breath,
I wonder if you would seek solace in my death?
Sometimes I want to disappear,
Make the act of suicide my lifetime career,
Free you my love once & for all,
Maybe one day I’ll answer death’s call.
Sometimes I want to end my life,
Pull the guns trigger or plunge in the knife,
Set you sailing away on life’s boat,
Send your soul drifting away on a float.
Sometimes I’d like to set you free,
Get you away from this horrible me,
Gently push you in true loves direction,
To offer you much more than my tainted affection.
Sometimes I pray for my life to end,
Stop your life from taking another harsh bend,
Let you live your life & seek love,
Letting you escape depressions hard shove.
Sometimes I want my light to go out,
When I can’t shake off the deep rooted doubt,
When hurt & pain gets such an iron grip,
That’s when I want death to let rip.
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Re: Sometimes...
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:48:25 PM AEST
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ohhhhhhhh hun this saddens me to know your feeling like this. Im sure he would not want to ever be apart from you. Thats what relationships are about the good and the not so good. Hang in there this painted such a vivid melocholy potrait
if you need me Im here!
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Re: Sometimes...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:53:24 PM AEST
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I hold no stock in suicide, it's so damned hard to change your mind afterward.
I do , however, know the feeling that if I were to drop dead I dont think I'd care much.
well said
A very emotional write my friend
Roses
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Re: Sometimes...
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:43:19 PM AEST
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| jesus god..depression has taken the site by the balls and is squeezing hard.. pleeeezeee let go..I haven't any balls and it still hurts.. and not my rakerman and my pixilater....(crying... take me with them if they gooo...) |
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Re: Sometimes...
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:04:33 PM AEST
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*hugs*
Kriss i dont know why your in a sad mood right now, but if you ever need to vent you can always count on mt to listen ok. But this was really nicely writen i feel depressed just reading this.
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Re: Sometimes...
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:32:44 PM AEST
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| Sister, please don't go that route. We are here for you ,all your friends, we too have had our share of ups and downs. Lots of kind folks are here to listen and help. Much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Sometimes...
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:28:24 PM AEST
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trust me, its no fun being the one left behind..... extra big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sometimes...
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by sojourner on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:30:23 PM AEST
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A very heavy hearted poem,
step out of the darkness,behind those dark
clouds the sun shines for you,wrap yourself in love, and true love,shall surely find you.
sojourner, |
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