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Simply Me
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SimplyMe
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:40:14 AM in AEST
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My writing is what i choose to reveal
Letting you and others know exactly what i feel
Showing you the life of me
What you get is what you see
So how dare you question me
If i want to write about suicide thats exactly what i'll do
There's no way i'd pretend to feel any diffrent just to satisfy you
Sorry i'm not the person you wish me to be
I wite about what i feel and that's simply me
I will write about whatever boils deep inside
If you don't like it then you can step aside
Just don't question me anymore
Don't read my writing if it's not what you long for
Now it's my turn to question you
Why do any of us do the things we do?
Because it's free will and we choose to
I hope those were the answers you were looking for
Maybe now you won't question me anymore
I am who i am and will forever be
I am Alucia Simmons and that's simply me
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Re: Simply Me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:06:10 PM AEST
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this was simply great, good writing,
pix xx |
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Re: Simply Me
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:10:49 PM AEST
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| This was a really touching piece. The easier ppl come to terms with themselves, they do so with others. Very few people are as sincere as u were in this poem. Beautiful work |
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Re: Simply Me
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:45:34 PM AEST
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| That's Good,... i like it.... i have a short saying myself ..... i am what u see, i see what i am... and in the end.... see all there is to see.... i like yours so blunt into expression, without actual offensiveness.... |
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Re: Simply Me
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by Candy_Dirtbag on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:24:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, gorgeous. Blunt and to the point. I get asked a lot why I never write about anything happly also, and I simply reply, "Writing about tragedy is what I'm best at, because it's all I've ever known." But, I think you out did me here. Awesomeistic poem. *Hugs, and much love.*
Jessica. |
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Re: Simply Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:09:47 PM AEST
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| Great write. I liked it. :-) |
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Re: Simply Me
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:56:13 PM AEST
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For the record - I quite agree. Personally, I think it's just foolish for someone to tell a person what to or what not to write about. We write about what moves us, what interests us, what we know, what we long for, who and what we love - hate - need.... or whatever it was that crossed our mind at that particular moment when we sat down to write. It occurs to me that there is probably nothing that would appeal to everyone - and, in an odd sort of way, I think there is something wonderful in that.
Your point is abundantly clear here, Alucia. You've expressed yourself well.
With an apology for my rambling on so,
~SNM~
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Re: Simply Me
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:28:21 AM AEST
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this is exactly how i feel
great write
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Re: Simply Me
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:52:19 PM AEST
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OH THANK YOU!! EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS!! My dear Alucia, people seem to not realize that they yearn for this kind of respect also..and yet, they go and say something like "Why don't you write anything happy in your life?" Hypocrisy... Disgusting. We all have our own way of expressing, and our feelings that are within the poem should not be messed with. It is what it is, you wrote about what you were feeling at that precise moment, and people should not butcher it. You are simply you.. and your name fits you very well! Thank you so much for this incredible write!!
I shall read and comment more when time permits, my friend. You have inspired me, and must succumb to my yearnings to write.. Merci once more, for voicing out what other people have been longing to say...yet, did not have the power to. All my love! Forever,
Your friend,
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